posted January 6th, 2011, 11:00 pm

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January 6th, 2011, 9:22 pm



Now that I look at it, I wonder if this page was even necessary. I feel like all it really did was draw things out just a wee bit longer. Well, I guess it helps establish that Rudy’s not a complete jerk… hopefully…

I ended up changing the dialogue on this one a few times too. Maria’s final line, in particular, originally stated that she thought Gavin was being “emo” because “on the off-hand chance Rudy was right about Rain, he’d owe her ever more money.” As amusing as I thought that was, Maria did technically deny that bet. Plus, no matter how I worded it, it just never felt natural. So while a little funny, I don’t think I really liked the line at all. “I hope she slaps him” though, seems fitting to me… and is potentially still kinda funny.

Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.

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January 6th, 2011, 11:32 pm

Teku_| (Guest)


It is, but Rain's a shy girl.
Any girl (unless they're in the same situation than Rain) would just blush and say no before leaving again.

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January 6th, 2011, 11:52 pm



"I hope she slaps him"
I think I'm in love! :P

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January 7th, 2011, 4:18 am



Hehe. I like how this page turned out, no worries.
A nice comic. And the suspense is killing me! :-)

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