Evil Incarnate

posted 28 Jan 2011 05:00 am

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28 Jan 2011 03:04 am

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Fun fact: I was originally going to keep gym class out of this story altogether. My line thinking was, “I’ll just come up with some excuse, because getting Rain through gym undetected would probably make things so much harder for her.” My first - and only halfway decent - excuse was to give Rain asthma. But then, I asked someone who had asthma if that was plausible, and she said, “maybe if it’s REALLY bad. I still went to and enjoyed gym class.”

Well…

But it was after that that I sort of realized I was just trying to avoid this whole thing out of laziness. So, I told myself to get over it. I’m going all out with every other aspect of the story, why get lazy about THIS of all things? Hence as a result, I actually kept Rain being asthmatic and am still making her take gym class. And heck, this page as a whole is sort of me poking fun at myself for trying to cop out of potentially good drama - trying SO hard to get out of it to have my best idea shot down in seconds.

That’ll learn me to try and be lame like that. ^^;

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28 Jan 2011 05:37 am

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Why doesn't she just change in the bathroom stalls? Girls at my school do that and no one questions them.

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28 Jan 2011 11:22 am

Schorhr

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Weak heart perhaps, or some complicated fracture...
But very severe asthma can be a reason to not be in gym class.

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11 Mar 2011 05:38 pm

Anna (Guest)

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I've got asthma, and I'm excused from gym class. So, yeah, not that implausible.

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14 Jan 2012 12:31 am

mysterioustgexpert (Guest)

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A religious who is called the evil incarnate? How delightfully ironic.

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