A Real Couple

posted February 22nd, 2011, 11:00 pm


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February 22nd, 2011, 8:07 pm

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I have mixed feelings about the third row of panels. It’s cute and funny watching her face change as each new thought enters her mind, but I do worry she may have gotten over being sad a little too fast. On the other hand, I hesitate to drag out sadness longer than necessary, or I could run the risk of making Rain annoying (which I obviously don’t want).

Rudy is of course chatty as always, and it seems like he wants to tell us a story. This should be interesting. ^_^

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Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.

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February 24th, 2011, 3:18 am

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*sits down* alright story time!

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February 2nd, 2013, 8:59 pm

Allie (Guest)

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I'd like to see some critique in the author comments about the use of the word "normal" to describe cisgenderism and how it others trans people.

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July 4th, 2015, 12:18 am

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Panel three is one of my favorite Rudy moments, it makes me smile every time.

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