I have mixed feelings about the third row of panels. It’s cute and funny watching her face change as each new thought enters her mind, but I do worry she may have gotten over being sad a little too fast. On the other hand, I hesitate to drag out sadness longer than necessary, or I could run the risk of making Rain annoying (which I obviously don’t want).
Rudy is of course chatty as always, and it seems like he wants to tell us a story. This should be interesting. ^_^
Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
*sits down* alright story time!
I'd like to see some critique in the author comments about the use of the word "normal" to describe cisgenderism and how it others trans people.
Panel three is one of my favorite Rudy moments, it makes me smile every time.