Hung Up

posted March 3rd, 2011, 11:00 pm


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March 3rd, 2011, 10:19 pm

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Get it? “Hung up”? Oh man, that’s punny. (Or, you know, terrible…) I had a few other titles in mind, but I just couldn’t resist the stupid joke. -_-

I hope you don’t mind the whole “phone conversation” thing. I feel like I use it a lot in this chapter. Admittedly I debated turning this specific scene into an IM conversation just to break it up, but figured it’d be more dramatic to actually have Gavin and Maria physically yelling at each other. Verbal rage for the win (I guess).

I really like this page because I feel like it’s something ANYONE can relate to (making it so delightfully frustrating). I mean, they’re arguing with each other, but they’re kind of on the same side… it’s just a different view from the same side. If they just shut up for a second and listened to each other instead of trying to make their own point, they might even see that.

(Good times, good times.)

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March 4th, 2011, 6:25 pm

iamunknownlol (Guest)

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oh dancing around the bush, as fun as that is its always fun to have someone say everything as it is, blunt and painfully amusing.

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