Kellen

posted 09 Mar 2011 05:00 am

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09 Mar 2011 02:05 am

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You’ve seen Kellen, remember? Fara was supposed to call her back?
http://rainlgbt.smackjeeves.com/comics/1104773/phone-call/

Anyway, this page is super talky! (As if you needed me to tell you that.) But I hope it’s not too confusing or anything. There is after all a lot of important dialogue here. Of most important note is the foreshadowing to developments involving the still unrevealed brother, Aiken. But then again, it seems Kellen herself is left out of the loop no matter what side of her family she’s talking to (I’m particularly proud of the punchline in this one).

Little things: Originally, I was thinking of setting actual song lyrics as ringtones for peoples’ phones. I ultimately opted against this for a few reasons though. For one thing - as anyone can plainly see - the page is a little crowded as is, and doesn’t really need MORE words filling it up. Second, I AM trying to avoid any actual products, names, franchises, etc. just to avoid potential legal complication later. It might actually be okay to do it but I personally feel better just playing it safe. Finally, I was still having trouble thinking of exactly what song Fara would have as a ringtone (I’m far too much of a perfectionist to just pick some random song out of a hat). I have narrowed it down to that I imagine her a classic rock fan; just think of your one of your favorites and just hear it coming from her phone. ^_^

Also, Kellen does not actually a psychic link with Aiken. Fara is teasing. If you hadn’t picked up on it by now, Fara teases everyone. That’s what she does. Kellen and Aiken are twins though; that part IS true.

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10 Mar 2011 07:05 am

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and let it be known i was here first again to comment, is there no stoping my maddness! well anyway this part is confusaling my poor little mind... keep up the good work or i will die!!! maybe...

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