Owe

posted May 31st, 2011, 8:00 pm


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May 31st, 2011, 4:44 pm

LittleLynn84

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Another “twofer” today. Although I did strongly debate whether or not I could have split it into two separate updates for a long time, I wasn’t sure how to really extend the second of the two pages without dragging the scene out too long though. I think it works though.

And I liked ending the chapter with what is easily the slickest thing Gavin’s ever said. ^_^

Well… chapter 4 should be interesting! XD

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Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.

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May 31st, 2011, 8:27 pm

filiasan

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This page has love written all over it <3

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May 31st, 2011, 8:55 pm

Randomonioum (Guest)

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D'aaaaw! While I'm still sailing on the RainxMaria boat, this update makes me happy!

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May 31st, 2011, 10:35 pm

Ohka (Guest)

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Noooo, I want Maria and Rain to fall for each other.

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June 1st, 2011, 6:29 am

Jewels (Guest)

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Maria and Rain? Nahhh, Gavin all the way~~~

And I'm thinking the author favours GxR more then MxR imo ;)

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June 2nd, 2011, 3:20 am

LostInTheThought

D'AWWWWWWWWWWWW

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the last panel is so cute

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June 5th, 2011, 5:55 am

T-Girl Kari (Guest)

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Super-mega-awesome Gavin moment! Very nice. I had to comment (after my extended break of not keeping up to date) to say that I absolutely LOVE the expression you gave Rain in the first panel. Major <3!

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November 20th, 2011, 6:33 am

takozilla

awwwwwwwwwwwww

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the my uh mom usually goes....part is soo cute!!!

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October 19th, 2014, 2:33 pm

LDN

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lmao @ gavin jfc. she doesnt owe you shiiit. its not always about youuu.

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July 5th, 2015, 4:28 pm

silver-wolf

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Has Gavin been for given?
What did Maria whisper to Rain?
Hamburger?
All of this, and more, as the story continues!

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