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posted November 4th, 2011, 7:00 am


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November 4th, 2011, 6:33 am

LittleLynn84

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Meanwhile, inside…

Somehow this didn’t translate from my script to the page as well as I meant it to. In the third panel, Rob suggests that Drew could be hooked up with Rudy. This actually has nothing to do with Rudy being dressed as a girl, because they really haven’t gotten a good look at him yet (obviously, otherwise Drew probably would not be doing what he’s about to do). However, rereading this page a few times, I wonder if that fact is not as clear as it should be. Whoops.

Highlight of the page: Still, I could just go back and forth between panels 3 and 4 over and over and over again.

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November 4th, 2011, 7:34 am

Drakanor Dream

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teeheehee you are mean :P

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November 4th, 2011, 9:40 pm

BluSlvrWolf (Guest)

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don't worry,it did come across clearly,and I'm quite curious to see just how Rudy/Ruby will play along ^_^

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November 20th, 2011, 7:01 am

takozilla

omg

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hes goin in!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh!!!!!!!!!

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January 13th, 2013, 1:25 am

Bell_the_gaomon

Its a trap!

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Rudy is going to trap him lol

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December 28th, 2014, 1:37 pm

Kimiko (Guest)

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Ah, Gavin still had his bolts. Just needed to glue them back on.

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December 6th, 2015, 10:55 am

ZFlame

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This is gonna be awesome.

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