Chase

posted November 21st, 2011, 6:31 am


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November 21st, 2011, 6:31 am

LittleLynn84

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Hurray for twofers. The first page could’ve probably stood alone just fine, but I wanted that last part in there. The script I pre-wrote seemed to think I could contain this whole thing in one page (silly me). But stubbornness wins in the end as I force it all into one update… regardless of how time constrained I’ve been lately.

There’s a LOT to comment on in these two pages (up to and including that we learn quite a bit about Chase), but let’s focus on the most important thing… the possible previous meeting of Rain and Chase.

I’m sure we’ve all been in both situations, actually. One: you know you met someone before but can’t quite place where. Two: they recognize you, but you don’t know them. Both can be crappy situations. The latter can be especially crappy hoever if you’ve only recently begun presenting yourself publicly with a different identity.

Today I thought I’d wrap my blurb a little differently by summing up the chapter so far. I think if anyone’s confused, this might help clarify the end of the second page: Kylie knows something’s up. Chase might know something’s up. Rudy’s a danger to her passability. Emily fudging hates her for completely unrelated reasons. And Maria’s nowhere to be found (and Gavin’s mingling, I guess). All this in a crowded party that she will require a ride from Kylie’s closed-minded sister to get away from (with, no doubt, a questioning Kylie in the car with her). In other words, Rain’s life sucks right now.

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Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.

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November 21st, 2011, 6:48 am

puddintane

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I noticed you didn't make any notes about underage drinking this time...

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November 21st, 2011, 9:05 pm

LittleLynn84

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@puddintane:
Yes. I probably should've added that Chase is over 21... he's just not quite as responsible of an adult as Fara or Heather, I suppose.

That said, with everything going on with Rain right now, I doubt she'd actually take a beer and add even greater risk.

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November 23rd, 2011, 3:31 am

danny (Guest)

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Dude, I love you. I love your work. I just finished ready your whole Web Comic and this is SO good! I love it! Rain is such a fascinating character and even the supporting cast are good, which you don't see much in a lot of stories. Gavin and Kylie are so interesting to watch/read and I don't know which one to root for! But I really just wanted to say: I love you! Great job! :)

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November 29th, 2011, 10:44 am

Schorhr

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Is she ripping the whole roll appart??? Wowsers!

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December 28th, 2014, 2:06 pm

Kimiko (Guest)

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Please let Chase's remark just be a joke about their costumes, please let Chase's remark just be a joke about their costumes, please let ..

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July 16th, 2017, 7:39 am

plasticwrap

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in some countries the legal age for beer is 16...

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August 10th, 2017, 8:30 am

LilMissSquirrel

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Good lord Chase is hideous. Also you'll find it amusing that I just almost accidentally typed his name as Chasie. Imagine if that was actually his name omg

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