Hurray for twofers. The first page could’ve probably stood alone just fine, but I wanted that last part in there. The script I pre-wrote seemed to think I could contain this whole thing in one page (silly me). But stubbornness wins in the end as I force it all into one update… regardless of how time constrained I’ve been lately.
There’s a LOT to comment on in these two pages (up to and including that we learn quite a bit about Chase), but let’s focus on the most important thing… the possible previous meeting of Rain and Chase.
I’m sure we’ve all been in both situations, actually. One: you know you met someone before but can’t quite place where. Two: they recognize you, but you don’t know them. Both can be crappy situations. The latter can be especially crappy hoever if you’ve only recently begun presenting yourself publicly with a different identity.
Today I thought I’d wrap my blurb a little differently by summing up the chapter so far. I think if anyone’s confused, this might help clarify the end of the second page: Kylie knows something’s up. Chase might know something’s up. Rudy’s a danger to her passability. Emily fudging hates her for completely unrelated reasons. And Maria’s nowhere to be found (and Gavin’s mingling, I guess). All this in a crowded party that she will require a ride from Kylie’s closed-minded sister to get away from (with, no doubt, a questioning Kylie in the car with her). In other words, Rain’s life sucks right now.
Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
I noticed you didn't make any notes about underage drinking this time...
Yes. I probably should've added that Chase is over 21... he's just not quite as responsible of an adult as Fara or Heather, I suppose.
That said, with everything going on with Rain right now, I doubt she'd actually take a beer and add even greater risk.
Dude, I love you. I love your work. I just finished ready your whole Web Comic and this is SO good! I love it! Rain is such a fascinating character and even the supporting cast are good, which you don't see much in a lot of stories. Gavin and Kylie are so interesting to watch/read and I don't know which one to root for! But I really just wanted to say: I love you! Great job! :)
Is she ripping the whole roll appart??? Wowsers!
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