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posted February 13th, 2012, 12:33 am


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February 13th, 2012, 12:33 am

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Told you it was a short one. ^_^

We wrap things up here with:
Emily and Chase still fighting, and with no end in sight.
Kylie, still unsure of himself… and now unsure of Rain as well.
Rob and Drew’s friendship becomes awkward.
Rudy answers ALL of Maria’s questions.
Gavin bids farewell after helping in the only way he felt he could.
And finally, Rain is left to wonder what the next day could possibly bring…

By the way, I’m not crazy about the narration here. To me, it feels tacky. But having short snippets of dialogue was actually worse. And not having any words at all just made it look horribly incomplete. So I feel like I couldn’t really win with this one. -_-

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Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.

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February 13th, 2012, 2:20 am

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thank you for a wonderful chapter! I always look forward to reading Rain, it's interesting and realistic ~
My favourite character is Kylie btw :)

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February 13th, 2012, 4:29 pm

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That is a short chapter all right!

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February 14th, 2012, 2:10 pm

Alyce (Guest)

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@Kiarawolf: I agree. I love this comic *so* much. It's my favorite.:)

Rain is very much my favorite, followed closely by Kylie. :)

I keep changing who I want Rain to end up with as well. I'm so excited to see where things end up!

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February 14th, 2012, 8:15 pm

Haldo (Guest)

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*applauds*

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December 28th, 2014, 3:25 pm

Kimiko (Guest)

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Wait, "Rudy answers ALL of Maria's questions"? Did I miss something?

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August 1st, 2015, 9:25 pm

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I gotta say that I like how this chapter ends with literally everyone except maybe one or two people being affected by this.

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