Starting now, I’m going to be naming the present day of the story whenever it changes from this point on. There has been a lot of confusion about the flow of time in the past, and I’m hoping this will adequately clear things up. I will also be (slowly but surely) retroactively going back and adding dates to pages throughout the first seven chapters as well. Please note, I will not be dating every page; just ones when the in-story date changes. In other words, if I don’t mention the date for so many pages, you can safely assume it’s the same date that was last mentioned. I hope that helps everyone.
On a completely unrelated note, if you’re familiar with my (indefinitely) unfinished story, “Lavender Town”, you may recognize Lavie and Amanda in panel 5. When I needed random girl designs, these two just popped into my head. Obviously, it can’t REALLY be them. Their personalities are all wrong and they’re in the wrong school (and wrong town). As such, they’re really just lookalikes. But I’m not above a shameless cameo like that once in a while. Um, the other girls are just girls though.
If you’re interested in “Lavender Town”, you can check that out here – http://littlelynn84.deviantart.com/gallery/60136
Rain, all characters and all other aspects of the story are copyright material belonging to me.
Hey! I Followed the link above, and have just read all the chapters so far in one sitting :) In relation to the recent revelation in Amanda's past, I had my suspicions for a while because of how sketchy the step-brother is and because it was clear there was something big in her past that Chris somehow knew about... But I only knew for certain as soon as she reacted to Chris grabbing her shoulders. The foreshadowing is well done, and I'm really captivated by the plot :)
I think i prefer Rain... However I will definitely will be checking back for updates on Lavender Town :D
(btw I commented here because I didn't want to sign up on deviant art. )
Delayed response on my part, but thanks for reading Lavender Town. I'm glad you've liked it so far. ^_^
Updates are scarce and it's been a while, but I do plan on finishing it eventually, so thanks for your continued interest. XD
I hate it when people do that. You can't "cure" gayness, you homophobes! AARRGHHH!
Also, hahaha. Poor Rain...
You were right about the voice-overs. They don't really fit in the story well.