Commotion

posted February 14th, 2013, 6:09 pm


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February 14th, 2013, 6:09 pm

LittleLynn84

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For the record, I’ve lived in many apartments over the last eight years or so. And I’ve had my share of “loudreds” living above, below, or down the hall from me (in fact, my current residence may be the first time that I’ve been situated right next to a couple that seems to actually like each other). You don’t get used to your neighbors fighting all the time, per se, but Heather’s right. You can’t just intervene with any little thing. Unless they’re yelling at 3 in the morning, or it sounds violent, I wouldn’t bother.

Anyway, we now come full circle to the exact moment that the drama you’re waiting for is happening. After the first two pages of Kylie getting excited over the gifts and displaying a little self-acceptance, I admit I had some trouble filling the last day of this week with another page. Originally, I’d considered touching a little bit on the rest of their family (as that’s something I haven’t touched yet), but I didn’t feel one - or perhaps even two - pages would’ve been enough. End result: we can learn about the Coven family later. Let’s now segue back to the main character’s complicated Christmas affairs (that people have been cursing my name for two weeks over).

No more waiting. We WILL at last know how things turn out on Monday.


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February 14th, 2013, 6:23 pm

lauren (Guest)

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woohoo the smack down is coming

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February 14th, 2013, 6:28 pm

Claire (Guest)

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MONDAY MONDAY MONDAY!

WITNESS THE FIGHT OF THE CENTURY AS FARA BRYER LAYS DOWN THE SMACKDOWN ON AIKEN FLAHERTY! ALSO SOMETHING SOMETHING BLAH BLAH I did this once already.

BITCH SLAP! BITCH SLAP! BITCH SLAP!! =D

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February 14th, 2013, 6:50 pm

WiddleMow

Perfect timing

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Im so glad that I have a week off from school to read the new pages of Rain!
:D can you spoil us with some two-pagers, Lynn?!?! PLEASE?

<3 Happy Valentines day everyone

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February 15th, 2013, 8:21 am

Piipiika (Guest)

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It could just be me though, but I finally realised that the Coven siblings live under Rain and Fara's appartment

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February 15th, 2013, 7:08 pm

WiddleMow

Samsies

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@Piipiika:
Nah, nah, its not just you. I just realized that too upon reading this page.
XD I thought they lived like...down the hall, or in...some other...kind of thing. yeah. wat. xD
Like an apartment complex? I DUNNO.

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February 15th, 2013, 8:30 pm

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@WiddleMow and Piipiika:

Honestly, I've been considering drawing up a blueprint or something, as I've heard a LOT of people express confusion on how the living arrangement of Rain/Fara and Heather/Kylie is set up. I don't know if that's just yet another example of my complete lack of understanding of the world outside where I've spent my entire life and "apartments don't work like this everywhere else" or something. Or if, you know, I just never stated it clearly enough.

So yeah. Either way, I may do that... eventually.

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February 16th, 2013, 10:29 pm

WiddleMow

It's fineeeee

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@LittleLynn84:

No no, its okay! I have never been in an apartment complex (really!) or know anyone who has been, so I've always been confused about how buildings like that were set up. i went back to previous chapters to understand, and I got it for the most part :)

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February 17th, 2013, 1:20 pm

Haldo (Guest)

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1 day 'til the smack is laid down

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July 14th, 2015, 2:27 am

NekoLeila (Guest)

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Am I the only one shipping Fara/Heather?

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