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March 10th, 2013, 6:07 pm

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Well, her presence here just begs so many questions. I would love to hear your thoughts.

On a personal note, I have been waiting TEN CHAPTERS for this moment. I’m so excited to finally formally introduce her into the story.


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March 10th, 2013, 6:50 pm

Allie (Guest)

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I'm guessing she didn't feel comfortable about the idea of being around Aiken again, but had heard him ranting about Rain so figured this would be a safe environment for her and decided (since she doesn't actually know any other trans people personally, presumably) to ask her and Fara to put her up until she's got somewhere else to go

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March 10th, 2013, 6:55 pm

Dezzy14

Why hello there~

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I sense a sh*t storm coming.
Also COMMENT VIRGINITY IS MINE!!!

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March 10th, 2013, 6:55 pm

Dezzy14

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dang it

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March 10th, 2013, 6:57 pm

Snowwater

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She looks really sweet, I hope she and Rain can get along well :)

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March 10th, 2013, 7:05 pm

WiddleMow

YES!

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Yes yes yes! It's Jessica!
FINALLY <3
*Squee*

I really hope Aunt Fara finds a way for them to be friends. I cant even. AUGH <3

YES!

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March 10th, 2013, 7:49 pm

RFZ

Yatta!

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Personally, I can't wait to see the interactions between Rain and Jessica. Because being another tranny she could be like a big sister type of person. Who knows? I can't wait to see whats next! XD ... On a side note, is just using "tranny" offensive? I sure hope not

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March 10th, 2013, 8:13 pm

LittleLynn84

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@RFZ:

It's typically seen as offensive to use the word "tranny". I feel it depends on context personally (which, in this case, I can plainly see you meant no harm), but lots of people do take great offense to it. To play it safe, I would probably recommend not using that word. (As a personal request, I - in particular - hate the word "trap". Not that you or anyone's said it recently, but as long as I'm talking about unacceptable words, I thought I should just bring this up.)

Anyway, transperson or even trans* are acceptable and are safer options less likely to hurt others'. I'd recommend those much more.

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March 10th, 2013, 8:26 pm

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Is Jessica talking with a male voice here? I just notice that her text isn't italicized, so I wasn't sure if that was intentional or if you forgot.

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March 10th, 2013, 8:29 pm

LittleLynn84

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@Guest:

It IS intentional, and I probably should have addressed this. My bad. ^^;

Jessica has been at this for a lot longer than Rain has and has found a comfortable female voice to speak in. So her text is not italicized because it IS her normal voice now.

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March 10th, 2013, 9:05 pm

RFZ

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@LittleLynn84:
Thanks, I will keep that in mind :)

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March 10th, 2013, 9:18 pm

Claire (Guest)

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I want her coat!

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March 11th, 2013, 1:29 am

Anti angst (Guest)

prediction

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They will hug.

And it will be cute.

I grantee it.

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March 11th, 2013, 5:08 pm

inferno427 (Guest)

err

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nice suprise, would be better if i could remember where i saw the name D: can someone please remind me?

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March 11th, 2013, 6:44 pm

LittleLynn84

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@inferno427:

Jessica = Aiken's fiance.
First mentioned here - http://rainlgbt.smackjeeves.com/comics/1263874/hungover/
Most recently mentioned here - http://rainlgbt.smackjeeves.com/comics/1639622/flashbacks/

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March 12th, 2013, 6:12 am

Allie (Guest)

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Incidentally, Jessica's coat reminds me of one my girlfriend has :)

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March 12th, 2013, 3:01 pm

Shiori-Tsumi

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ASDKFJ, I've seen her before in the comic but I still wasn't prepared for just how pretty Jessica is. Because wow. She is PRETTY.

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December 29th, 2014, 8:52 am

Kimiko (Guest)

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At first I was like, who's that, another colleague of Fara's maybe? And then I remembered her. I hope this doesn't go awkward again. You promised at least one chapter without drama, right? Please?

Is it just my imagination, or are trans characters in fiction always unrealistically pretty?

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August 2nd, 2015, 12:06 am

TallMist

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Ooooh, I hope this plot leads to Aiken realizing his mistake...

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