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posted June 18th, 2013, 8:35 pm


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June 18th, 2013, 8:35 pm

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Well, that was a short overall interaction, but in the last couple pages, our January Girl’s talked about herself a fair bit. Just what kind of person is Ana, I wonder? DOES Rain indeed have a crush on her? For that matter, does Drew? What is this page telling us about him (apart from that he’s extremely gullible).

In case it wasn’t clear, Ana leaves by passing behind Gavin. And then Drew runs up from behind Maria. In the final panel, Maria’s pointing back behind her, directing Drew back the way he came to get him off Ana’s case. I’m not keen on spelling that out, but I wasn’t feeling confident in terms of clarity. Better safe than sorry, I guess. ^^;


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June 18th, 2013, 9:43 pm

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You did a fine job showing how Maria was trying to get him away from Ana. No worries Lynn, we got it ^O^ or at least I did hehe

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June 18th, 2013, 9:51 pm

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I noticed it as well

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June 18th, 2013, 11:03 pm

Glitch (Guest)

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Does Drew still not know Ana's name? Or is he just assuming they wouldn't know her name? Hm...

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June 19th, 2013, 3:00 am

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It was clear, don't worry. Panel 7 makes it obvious.

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June 19th, 2013, 4:34 am

Allie (Guest)

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This page is telling us that Drew is "persistant", which is a euphemism for can't take a hint and is straying towards the border of "predator".

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December 7th, 2014, 12:29 am

Zhe (Guest)

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I do believe you mistyped Gavin's dialogue in the first panel. What he was supposed to say was that Rain was having...a /HARD/ day!
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What did you expect, random guitar riffs from nowhere? Come on, this is the real world here!

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December 24th, 2015, 5:09 am

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Gotta say, just btw, Drew has a great taste in people > u <

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