Chapter 20 - Just a Quiet Weekend

posted January 30th, 2014, 7:23 pm


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January 30th, 2014, 7:29 pm

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Originally, I was going to have another Rain Delay today and start the chapter on Monday. I kinda hated the Delay I had planned for today though, so let's just get back to what you're really here for. XD

I imagine the part of this page a lot of people are going to home in on is Kylie (or Puddle, I guess; he has that effect on people). As I've said already earlier this week, it's been a long time since Kylie has been active in the story. It was honestly one of the driving motivations for writing this chapter (among other things of course)!

Emily also gets special notice here. In school, she can still kinda hide her belly thanks to her blazer (keen eyed readers might notice she started buttoning it shut from Chapter 15 on). But out of school, in a perhaps less problematic environment we can see what her progress is looking like when she's not trying to hide it as much. Again, I don't have a lot of firsthand experience around pregnant women, so I referred to Google Images for examples of what she should look like at this point. Apparently, it's extremely varied, so this is just what I'm going with.

Another thing perhaps worth mentioning is that that's an odd gathering of characters. Can't help but wonder what kind of dynamic this will spark. I will say this chapter isn't quite as contained as the last few, so it will be cutting away to a few others (some you might not expect). These three are definitely the stars of the chapter though.

Sigh... I guess I will draw attention to Puddle too. If nothing else, it's the first time he's ever been on a chapter page. XD


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January 30th, 2014, 8:29 pm

Hannah (Guest)

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Sooooooo Emily is hanging out with Kylie* rather than Ky now. I predict Rain telling Emily her secret in this chapter since the whole Kylie* thing will probably put her more at ease and give her a better idea of Emily's feelings towards the whole gender thing.

Well, I can hope anyway. It's not like I think Rain owes Emily an explanation or anything, but she does seem like a level headed person who would be good to talk to in certain situations, and it would be nice if Rain could remove the barrier keeping her from having a relationship like that. Don't get me wrong her current set of friends (out of the ones who know anyway) are great and all but it's always good to have that one friend who can/will give you an objective opinion of the situation whatever it may be. :P

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January 30th, 2014, 8:43 pm

jazgemo213

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for some reason i dont think its going to be that quite of a weekend

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January 30th, 2014, 11:51 pm

Rambo (Guest)

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YAY KY(LIE):D

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January 31st, 2014, 7:33 am

WingedReaper777

Give me that damn rabbit!

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I want that rabbit sooooo bad! ~<3
I will gladly trade it for my fat ass dog...pleeeeease?

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January 31st, 2014, 2:57 pm

Danielle (Guest)

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Whoa, What an incredible comic as a trans girl myself this really hits my feels. Keep up the amazing work <3

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January 31st, 2014, 6:18 pm

Sheep (Guest)

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@jazgemo213:
I too doubt the veracity of the title, for any point in time that is quiet, in Rian, is passed over by time skips.

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December 25th, 2015, 5:04 pm

Maplestrip

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PUDDLE! :D

but also

KYLIEEEE! :D

Enthusiasm aside, I was almost worried Kylie would barely show up in the volume I bought, hihi ^_^" I think I remember this chapter being interesting, though~

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