More Talking

posted December 30th, 2014, 5:25 pm


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December 30th, 2014, 5:25 pm

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The last panel on the second page - if it wasn't clear - is referencing the first panel on the previous update. Sequential art, you see. It's all connected. XD

Some really interesting revelations and developments with their relationship and with Emily's character here too. There's a lot to take from a lot of things here, and I'd love to hear what you're walking away from this page with.

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December 30th, 2014, 5:51 pm

Clarice (Guest)

Cuute!

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RAIN IS SO CUTE IN THAT LAST PANEL.

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December 31st, 2014, 2:45 am

Ranger

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@Clarice: YES.
SO MUCH YES.

(Emily, too!)
Cuteness overload.

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December 31st, 2014, 11:27 am

Erin (Guest)

Claire face

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@Clarice: That is an alarming amount of Cute

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December 30th, 2014, 7:39 pm

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From an artist's point of view, the face proportions in panels 2 and 3 look VERY good compared to the rest of this entire comic series.

I've seen a lot of improvement in your art, but I was a bit taken back by these two panels. :P

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December 30th, 2014, 8:18 pm

The Aussie Bloke (Guest)

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Cheerful Emily is best Emily :)

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December 31st, 2014, 4:53 am

cathyfan (Guest)

story,art.

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longtime "cathy" fan enjoys "rain". thinks you draw better than ms. guisewhite. both of you good at storytelling.

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December 31st, 2014, 3:30 pm

Guest (Guest)

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@LittleLynn84:

Did you hear about Leelah?

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January 1st, 2015, 4:36 pm

Grenartia

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@Guest:

I did. Her story hit me rather close to home. We shared the same birth name, and when I was 17, I considered throwing myself in front of a train for similar reasons. A bunch of coincidences, that just scream out to me, that I could've been her.

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December 31st, 2014, 3:57 pm

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Thank you so much for making this comic. I found it about a week and a half ago and am a really slow reader. I just now got fully caught up on this comic and I'm totally in love with it. I can relate so much to everything Rain is going through because of being transsexual myself. It's really made me want to try to transition again. Last time I came out to my family, I just got rejected, so I never went through with the transitioning... It's also made me want to tell some of my close friends about me, I just worry about their reactions still. Regardless, thank you so much for this comic. I loved it so much and will be following it very closely ^^

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December 31st, 2014, 4:26 pm

Kimiko (Guest)

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Page 1, panel 5 - Is Emily talking to the fourth wall? ;)

And that last panel the cuteness got so much it put them into SD mode. ^_^

ETA: Gah! D: The 'Next' link's disappeared! Noooo :o
Which means I've caught up on Rain half an hour before the end of the year, after about four days of reading this comic.

Thank you lots for making this awesome story, Jocelyn. You rock ^_^

Right, where's the RSS feed on this thing? I need to know of updates immediately. And let's take a look at the rest of the linked pages. There's bound to be interesting stuff..

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December 31st, 2014, 6:47 pm

Allie (Guest)

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@Kimiko: hehe :3

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December 31st, 2014, 11:33 pm

Don Edwards (Guest)

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@Kimiko: "Page 1, panel 5 - Is Emily talking to the fourth wall? ;)"

There are some things that are easier to say if you're not directly facing anyone you're talking to. And in the next panel she's looking at Rain out of the corner of her eyes. So no, she's talking to Rain, but facing the fourth wall.

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January 1st, 2015, 4:12 am

Kimiko (Guest)

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@Don Edwards: I know she's talking to Rain of course, but the way she's shown makes it look like she's also addressing the shippers out there ;)

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January 1st, 2015, 12:27 am

jenny (Guest)

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:o they're both sooo cute they need more plush for their slumber party

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January 1st, 2015, 11:20 am

LittleLynn84

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@All:

Just a little wish for a happy new year for you all. I meant to do this here yesterday, but I've been a little under the weather and passed out early instead. XD

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