Rough Day

posted November 5th, 2015, 7:09 pm


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November 5th, 2015, 7:13 pm

LittleLynn84

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I feel like this scene transitions weirdly from the last one here. Sorry for that, if it's noticeable. There's two pages of deleted scene between this and the previous page. But besides being apparently very expendable, I was not happy at all with them. If I can fix it up, maybe it can be added later as a flashback (I've done that once before), but for now... a weird scene transition.

Anyway, first day back to school, and all new drama seems to be setting in for Rain and several others. Well, at least Maria and Chanel seem to be doing okay.

I feel like there's not a lot else to say about this one. It's important, but more so as a means of setting the stage for the remainder of this chapter and leading into the next, rather than offering new information. So, uh... look forward to next time, I guess. XD

Speaking of which, the current chapter will end in a couple weeks. This will be followed by a hiatus if Volume 3 is still not done by then. How long of a hiatus might be variable; it could be very short, or it could be a bit longer. I don't know for sure yet, but I will absolutely keep you posted.


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November 5th, 2015, 8:24 pm

Arcanist Lupus (Guest)

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The break is a little weird, since the previous page ends with a question which then isn't answered (although we already know the answer, so I don't mind skipping ahead). Maybe if you changed Emily's last speech bubble to be a statement, like some sort of encouragement, instead? I think that would help. Then if you need to bring the pages back latter as a flashback, you could add the question to the pages then.

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November 7th, 2015, 4:30 am

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Hi LittleLynn! I actually don't think I would've noticed anything odd about the transition from the previous page since you had that "Silhouettes" page in between. As Arcanist Lupus said, we already know the answer to the question posed. This page simply represents a slight jump forward in time. Of course, I do expect that at some point, we'll get to see Rain explaining to Emily as well as finding out about Gavin's issues.

On a side note; I received my Vol 1 and 2 books a couple of days ago! YAAAAAAYYY!!! Finished Vol 1 yesterday and started Vol 2 at work this morning (one of the benefits of working graveyard shift). Love your work! Thank you!

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November 9th, 2015, 6:36 pm

Gray (Guest)

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I've just been randomly wondering...
Is Rain binary trans?
If so, it'd be really cool to see a nonbinary person like demigender or agender. It'd be cool if Vincent was a demiguy or something.
But theese are just random thoughts and I am in no way a talented artist and writer like you.

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December 30th, 2015, 7:52 pm

Ai Asato (Guest)

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So it seems that Rain has been playing some Valiantly Standard according to that "Mrgrgr", huh? ^o^

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December 31st, 2015, 6:52 pm

Maplestrip

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Actually, I really want to know what "the answer" was that Rain gave to Emily. Did she tell her that she needs to have a talk with former-best friend Debbie or did she just brush it off? I suppose we won't find out until later...

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