A Little More Detailed

posted July 21st, 2017, 9:05 am


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July 21st, 2017, 9:11 am

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Why yes, I am going to be coy and not show the dress in question. You might see hints of one or two dresses before prom, but I'm keeping them mostly pretty under wraps until the big night itself. Why? Because! XD

Anyway, I do admit to a bit of a fallacy on this page - that being that Maria pulls her whole phone out of one of her side pockets. I know; that's completely impossible. Girl pockets could never contain a phone! Originally, I was going to have her pull it out of her back pocket (which is more plausible), but I unwittingly gave her the "sweatshirt-around-her-waist" look in the previous page. And for some reason, I struggled with drawing her getting around that to her back pocket. So I hope you'll forgive me and suspend your disblief for this. (Moral of the story: This is why clothing designs really should be planned in advance in comics.) XD

Not much else to say except that I think these two are always so cute. But gee, what could that small catch be?


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July 21st, 2017, 9:31 am

Ali (Guest)

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You're killing me with that dress reveal suspense!

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July 21st, 2017, 12:07 pm

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I am going to take a random guess with the catch being about measurements and requiring less clothes than might otherwise be comfortable with. Could be to do with the underwear and such also since certain styles of dresses require certain underwear that is more concealed so to speak.
Either way it will be nice to see them all at the big night with a build up suspense surprise :p

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July 22nd, 2017, 1:04 am

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@Asuyuia: I had the same thought. While Maria would surely like to have a candid look at her girlfriend (going by Maria's response when Nelly mentioned how well endowed she is) she would never want to make her uncomfortable, which can be a difficulty between a couple with differing views of sexuality. What I have heard from most Ace folks is that when they end up in situations that are sexually charged they simply feel nothing other than confusion at the behavior of non-ace people who are tripping all over feelings, hormones, and social mores. Maria likely dosent know about all of that though as Nelly is the only Ace person she knows and neither of them is mature enough in the LGBT community to have knowledge of such things - both are young and figuring it out blind.

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July 21st, 2017, 2:35 pm

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I think the catch is going to be related to money, remember Emily's Halloween party?

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July 21st, 2017, 3:52 pm

00Stevo

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Aww I wanted to see the dress

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July 21st, 2017, 6:43 pm

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I thought Chanel was the costume designer/wearer?

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July 21st, 2017, 10:37 pm

LittleLynn84

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@Kimiko_0:

Chanel may have an interest in costumes, but she can't make them. I don't think it's established where she got the dress she wore on their date night, but the idea in my head is that she found it online or something.

Maria's costume-making talents have been alluded to a few times though. Admittedly, it's spread out, and probably easy to forget/miss. But it's there. ^_^
http://rainlgbt.smackjeeves.com/comics/1299295/long-hair/
http://rainlgbt.smackjeeves.com/comics/1961272/date-night/
http://rainlgbt.smackjeeves.com/comics/2377098/gorgeous/

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July 22nd, 2017, 3:32 am

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@LittleLynn84: Ah, I see. My memory's just bad again. Thanks for the links ^_^

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July 21st, 2017, 9:35 pm

Knayt (Guest)

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<blockquote>(Moral of the story: This is why clothing designs really should be planned in advance in comics.)</blockquote>

An alternate moral is that more girls' and womens' clothing should be designed with functional pockets.

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July 22nd, 2017, 12:52 pm

TranshumanAr (Guest)

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I knew there was going to be something to cause drama! There is no easy path to happiness!

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July 22nd, 2017, 4:53 pm

CM23

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lol That pocket problem is why I wear my cargo pants so much. I love those pants. Never have to bring a purse when I've got all those perfectly-sized pockets.

I could imagine Maria designing her own pants with practical pockets, if she's good at costume-making and stuff. But, you've had her mention on this page that she's "up for the challenge" of making a dress, so could it be that she's not skilled enough to make pants? I've heard the inseam can be difficult to get right.

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July 22nd, 2017, 7:49 pm

EwwwJeans (Guest)

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But almost all of my dresses have fully functional pockets now... it's just stupid girls jeans.

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July 22nd, 2017, 10:23 pm

Anon-ish

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Lol that's so true! Every pair of "girl" pants have pockets that are only like 3-4 inches and that's only if they have pockets to begin with. My friends complain about it all the time, though one of my friends has pockets in her dresses that could fit a whole phone easily without showing... I just claim that mystery to magic.

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July 22nd, 2017, 10:41 pm

EwwwJeans (Guest)

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The best are pockets that are just for show and are actually completely stitched shut!

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July 24th, 2017, 4:20 pm

Claire (Guest)

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This series is amazing, helped with early transitioning alot. Thanks for making it.

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