Humble

posted June 6th, 2018, 9:05 am


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June 6th, 2018, 9:09 am

LittleLynn84

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I've had somewhat mixed feelings about including this one. I guess it further establishes where Debbie and Holly stand with Emily after she became "fulltime friends" with the school's resident queer crew, but I don't really feel like any of this is new information. Maybe the refresher is at least welcome, since we haven't focused on this in a while?

Anyway, hopefully you get something out of this page. If not, sorry for the dud. Better pages are coming!


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June 20th, 2018, 11:14 pm

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June 6th, 2018, 9:25 am

Bird (Guest)

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I really like this page, it shows a more serious side of Holly. ;)

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June 6th, 2018, 12:12 pm

TranshumanAr (Guest)

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FRIENDSHIP!!!!

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June 6th, 2018, 3:29 pm

Adama (Guest)

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It's nice to see them thinking about it.

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June 6th, 2018, 4:09 pm

ljalex

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i can't really muster up any sympathy for Debbie, honestly. pity, yeah, but she drove Emily away and she needs to stop looking for excuses.

(note this is a critique of her as a person, not you as a writer! keep on rocking, Lynn )

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June 7th, 2018, 1:16 am

pyro (Guest)

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actually with all the Todd / Maria / Chanel drama, I had fogoten that Holly and debie had stopped talking to Emily.

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June 7th, 2018, 5:55 am

glmdgrielson (Guest)

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Dang, that's rough. I do like the acknowledgement of character development and the expressions here.

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June 7th, 2018, 9:18 am

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Unless she does something homophobic/transphobic /otherwise offensive, more Holly is always a good idea.

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June 7th, 2018, 10:54 pm

Willowstream646 (Guest)

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Nah, she loves gay people, remember? They're so funny! Her uncle has a "gay roommate", and he's hilarious!!

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