Safe and Happy

posted April 29th, 2019, 9:53 am


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April 29th, 2019, 9:53 am

LittleLynn84

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I sorta have mixed feelings about this page. I mostly worry it feels a little redundant. But it's also important enough that I don't think I can remove it or alter it too much.

If we look at it as a transitional page from the last few into the next few, I think it works better, but I am sorry if it doesn't feel like much right now. I'm sure many of you have questions too, but we're getting there. In the meantime, I hope you still like today's page for what it is.


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April 29th, 2019, 10:13 am

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I don't see it as redundant, this is big and makes sense for Emily to bring it up to Rain not only because she's her SO but because she's living with her and her aunt

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April 29th, 2019, 10:25 am

DalekBeifong

Not redundant!

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I see this page mostly as assuring us that Emily took Debbie's talk to heart, and also that she trusts her girlfriend enough to inform her. If not for this page, I honestly would have been worried Emily didn't tell Rain her mom was back, and that would have made me really stressed for the entire chapter, or more.

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April 29th, 2019, 10:40 am

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While Debbie can be a butt, she still cares for Emily.

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April 29th, 2019, 11:38 am

Izai (Guest)

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Nah it's a nice little bit of reassurance. Nothing wrong with it

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April 29th, 2019, 11:45 am

TranshumanAr (Guest)

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Rain and Emily deserve happiness! While Emily's mom becomes a drunken workaholic in her lonely big house, Emily will give birth to her baby and have supporting people around her.

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April 29th, 2019, 12:23 pm

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@LittleLynn84: The page is fine, don’t worry! Your faithful readers eagerly await each and every page of yours!

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April 29th, 2019, 4:35 pm

Adama (Guest)

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We needed to see Rain giving her support.

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April 29th, 2019, 5:51 pm

angrydoritoobsession

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Such beautiful expressions in this page!

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April 29th, 2019, 8:51 pm

Kateralia

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This page resonates with me, as I know what it's like to have a horrible mother. To know what she does & will do is wrong & yet still wanting to go to her is a very conflicting emotion.

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April 29th, 2019, 10:06 pm

IXman

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What happens on this page really should be stated at some point instead of handled off screen, so this page or it equivalent would have had to happen at some point so it is needed however yes it feels pointless. Show don't tell, thank you for following the golden rule of story telling.

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April 30th, 2019, 5:46 am

Mild Lee Interested (Guest)

Thankyou

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Thankyou for creating Rain and giving her story to us week after week. You really do not need to keep apologising for what you must perceive as problems with pacing, storytelling, technique or anything else. We have stuck with this story for a long while now because we like the characters, the story AND the way you tell it. It's good. We like it. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!

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April 30th, 2019, 8:27 am

Jazmin (Guest)

THIS

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@Mild Lee Interested: 100% agreed.

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May 1st, 2019, 8:37 am

Rubombee

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O_O

Here! I did it! I read everything!

And I LOVE THIS STORY OMG. <3

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