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posted August 16th, 2019, 7:36 am


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August 16th, 2019, 7:36 am

LittleLynn84

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So, real talk: When writing parts of this chapter, I had in fact considered a scenario where Gavin approached Colette and offered more than his blazer. In short, he would offer his entire suit, initiating a second clothing swap. While I did think it was a cute idea, I had a lot of reservations about redundancy and - as described here - the size difference. Like, Rudy is a little taller than Ky, but they do have similar builds, so I didn't feel it was too much of a stretch for them to swap. But I don't think Gavin could realistically swap clothes with any other character (of any gender) in this story. He's just the only one I really draw like that.

It's not to say he can't wear a dress; he just can't wear that one. Of course, this leads to the other concern I had about writing in that direction. Gavin would not be doing this out of any dysphoria or interest on his part; it'd solely be in support of Colette. And while he's a pretty cool guy like that, and I could absolutely see him donning a dress if it's for his friends, he doesn't actually know Colette. The offer, best intentions or not, might just come off a little weird and creepy. I just don't think it would've worked.

Still, I gave that whole scenario a lot more thought than you might expect. As probably evidenced by me feeling the need to ramble on about what didn't happen. XD

Anyway, this page is really just meant to be a cute exchange between Ruby and Colette. And because they do have a lot they could talk about, we will see more of these two next time too. ^_^


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September 17th, 2019, 4:38 pm

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August 16th, 2019, 8:52 am

RabidRabbitArmy

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Dude looks good in that suit.

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August 16th, 2019, 9:10 am

Izai

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That monocle

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August 16th, 2019, 9:13 am

Nyani Koyo

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Yes looks great in the suit, but I am really wanting to ship these two as so far they seem to be very compatible with each other. At the very least see them becoming BFF's

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August 16th, 2019, 10:21 am

He Who Abides

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I can see them together romantically, especially if Colette is attracted to other men.

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August 16th, 2019, 10:22 am

He Who Abides

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That's a reply to Nyani Koyo. Stupid site won't let me do the staggered response thing most of the time. Grrrr.

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August 16th, 2019, 11:14 am

Barnarnar

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I've often thought that "what if?" ideas (including dreams, conversations like this, and hopes and fears expressed by various characters) are a great way for an author to present alternate realities that don't fit the plot line or where you want the story to go. Good job!

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August 16th, 2019, 11:36 am

AshenOne

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Gavin could have done like Jaune Arc from RWBY and do a dancing number with Ana, Maria and Chanel.

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August 16th, 2019, 6:25 pm

RabidRabbitArmy

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That would've been fun to see.

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August 17th, 2019, 4:28 pm

angrydoritoobsession

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@AshenOne: definitely one of my favourite RWBY moments

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